Monday, 1 June 2015

Autumn leaves

Autumn Leaves


Autumn leaves falling

like a feather floating to the ground


Autumn leaves sway in the wild windy weather

like seaweed in the rough ocean.


Autumn leaves have symmetrical lines

like butterflies wings.


Autumn leaves turn crunchy, dry and brown

like burnt toast.

6 comments:

  1. Wow Rosemary your poem is really descriptive :-)

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  2. Dear dear Rosemary I love your
    Blog but next time try and make it bigger
    And rime more .from brooke



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  3. Good job. I like how you said autumn leaves turn crunchy, dry and brown like burnt toast. Also I like how you said autumn leaves sway in the wildly weather like seaweed in rough Ocean. Great writing Rosemary!

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  4. I really like your autumn leaves poem and how you said "autumn leaves sway in the wild windy weather" and I think you should write more poems. :D

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  5. Great poem Rosemary you used a great use of language and Similies I really like the the bit about the feaher I felt like I was looking outside at the autumn leaves next time it's autumn I will defently pay more atention to the beautiful autumn leaves well done! :)

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  6. You have written a great poem Rosemary. I like how in the first paragraph

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